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Reign of Fire:

Chapter 1:


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I think it's really good, Eddy. I think you need to look up the correct spelling for the guilly suits (I think it's Ghillie, but I could be wrong).

Anyway, I really like it. It's got a nice raw feel to it, and I like the banter that the boys share. It really feels like a soldier has written it from his memories, almost like a diary of the exact spoken word.

When did you write this, by the way? And I'd love to read more of it if you're planning on posting some more.
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I think it's really good, Eddy. I think you need to look up the correct spelling for the guilly suits (I think it's Ghillie, but I could be wrong).

Anyway, I really like it. It's got a nice raw feel to it, and I like the banter that the boys share. It really feels like a soldier has written it from his memories, almost like a diary of the exact spoken word.

When did you write this, by the way? And I'd love to read more of it if you're planning on posting some more.

I wrote this ages ago but its still a novel in progress. If you would like to read more I would gladly show it too you. By the way this is all copyright of Edabbott production studios, lunacy town, a small village on the edge of Mars Smile but Thankyou.
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You should post the next chapter on here for us all to read. Just follow the instructions I gave you on the Music section, and you should be fine!
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Another good Chapter, Eddy!

I love the way Sam shouts "BASTARDS!"

I also like the way this chapter isn't all action and shooting the Taliban in the face repeatedly with a sawn-off shotgun. It's almost peaceful.

Good job.
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Cheers its like a close up of life in the military compared to other types of books Smile
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