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PostSubject: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:06 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:41 pm

I think it's really good, Eddy. I think you need to look up the correct spelling for the guilly suits (I think it's Ghillie, but I could be wrong).

Anyway, I really like it. It's got a nice raw feel to it, and I like the banter that the boys share. It really feels like a soldier has written it from his memories, almost like a diary of the exact spoken word.

When did you write this, by the way? And I'd love to read more of it if you're planning on posting some more.

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PostSubject: Re: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:04 pm

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I think it's really good, Eddy. I think you need to look up the correct spelling for the guilly suits (I think it's Ghillie, but I could be wrong).

Anyway, I really like it. It's got a nice raw feel to it, and I like the banter that the boys share. It really feels like a soldier has written it from his memories, almost like a diary of the exact spoken word.

When did you write this, by the way? And I'd love to read more of it if you're planning on posting some more.

I wrote this ages ago but its still a novel in progress. If you would like to read more I would gladly show it too you. By the way this is all copyright of Edabbott production studios, lunacy town, a small village on the edge of Mars Smile but Thankyou.
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PostSubject: Re: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:50 am

You should post the next chapter on here for us all to read. Just follow the instructions I gave you on the Music section, and you should be fine!

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PostSubject: Re: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:55 am

Another good Chapter, Eddy!

I love the way Sam shouts "BASTARDS!"

I also like the way this chapter isn't all action and shooting the Taliban in the face repeatedly with a sawn-off shotgun. It's almost peaceful.

Good job.

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PostSubject: Re: My books! Hope you enjoy :) Copyrighted by edabbott industries 2010   Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:56 am

Cheers its like a close up of life in the military compared to other types of books Smile
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